As the wire desk editor of The Colorado Chronicle, I’m reading over your submission and I have to flag one immediate inconsistency: the byline credits Westword, which is Denver’s established alternative weekly—not a publication typically aligned with The Colorado Chronicle, and the dateline/style doesn’t match our house style. Beyond that, the headline and summary are coherent and the subject matter (a first-time Phish show review) is solid arts/culture copy for a Colorado paper.
Sources: Westword (Denver alt-weekly)
